Talk:Hurricane Humberto strengthens to Category 3 while approaching Bermuda

Headline

Headlinese would generally drop the "a", and we might look for a way to eliminate the "it". --Pi zero (talk) 01:41, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

Will take a look in a second --DannyS712 (talk) 01:52, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

Done --DannyS712 (talk) 02:04, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

Looks good. Thx. --Pi zero (talk) 02:05, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

Submitted

@Pi zero, SVTCobra: I've submitted this for review, but I'm still looking for an image to add. If you get to review it before I add an image, I'll just wait until you're done; please don't actually publish until I can add an image (or two). Thanks, --DannyS712 (talk) 02:07, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

This maybe? File:Humberto Tropical Wind Speed probabilities.png --SVTCobra 02:11, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

@SVTCobra: maybe; I wanted a similar pair to the first Humberto article. I submitted this so that I wouldn't delay a review while I look; it may take a while for me to settle on the perfect image. Thanks, --DannyS712 (talk) 02:13, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

This is 9-18 File:Humberto 2019-09-18 2050Z.jpg --SVTCobra 02:14, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

@SVTCobra: which has a logo at the bottom - I should have something in a few minutes --DannyS712 (talk) 02:17, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

OK, but we will still credit NOAA/NHC. --SVTCobra 02:21, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

@SVTCobra: okay, Done and ready --DannyS712 (talk) 02:25, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

We cannot just have US-Gov sources. We need something else. --SVTCobra 02:37, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

@SVTCobra:  Doing... --DannyS712 (talk) 02:42, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

Done --DannyS712 (talk) 02:58, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

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