Talk:England: Parts of Birmingham area flood; music festival evacuates

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Sorry, I accidentally hit enter without a summary. I was going to say it's usually assumed there was rain if there was a flood, and including the music festival detail makes the headline more unique — important, as headlines can never be reused. Heavy Water (talk) 19:42, 10 July 2023 (UTC)

Hiya @Heavy Water, I'm still getting the hang of headlining, thank you for your help with it. I hope I'm slowly making improvement in my writing style and synthesis. I did not write a crazy amount before starting to volunteer here, as was probably quite obvious. Asheiou (talk) 20:39, 10 July 2023 (UTC)

No problem. Yeah, your writing is definitely better than it was when you started out, especially considering you've only been here a month yet. Heavy Water (talk) 21:12, 10 July 2023 (UTC)

It's all thanks to the great feedback I've been receiving from yourself and @JJLiu112! I do thoroughly go through it after every published article and then try and avoid making the same mistakes again. Thanks the both of you. Asheiou (talk) 22:38, 10 July 2023 (UTC)

Review of revision 4736597 [Passed]

Revision 4736597 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:12, 11 July 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: See edit history; nothing particularly major. I am treating the Festival's evacuation on Sunday as NEWINFO — as it's fairly marginal — to retain freshness. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4736597 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:12, 11 July 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: See edit history; nothing particularly major. I am treating the Festival's evacuation on Sunday as NEWINFO — as it's fairly marginal — to retain freshness. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

However, Asheiou, please do not forget to add continent cats, country cats, and top-level topic cats — in this case, Category:Disasters and accidents and Category:Weather. Heavy Water (talk) 01:55, 11 July 2023 (UTC)