Talk:Chilean earthquakes: in pictures
Based on Haitian earthquake: in pictures. --MisterWiki (talk) 03:23, 16 March 2010 (UTC)
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Revision 978978 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:38, 18 March 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: You didn't include OR notes! I should fail this immediately! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 978978 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:38, 18 March 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: You didn't include OR notes! I should fail this immediately! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
- OR notes: I went to 3 towns near Pichilemu (well, not too near), Lolol, Paredones and Bucalemu. Many of the photos are from that places, or La Cruz Hill, place from where I have been reporting. --MisterWiki (talk) 00:40, 18 March 2010 (UTC)
FA? seriously?
editIf this is the best WN can get, I am disappointed. There are numerous grammatical errors in the photo descriptions. The photos do not describe as much as they should. For example: In the photo of the "broken" bridge, I can't see any evidence of damage. To think that this passed 7-0 (or whatever the number was) is very disappointing. Since I can't edit the page, I think that this page should be fixed or removed as a FA. Griffinofwales (talk) 21:35, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
- Grammar can be fixed. AFAIK this article was given FA because of the WN:OR. --Diego Grez let's talk 21:38, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
List of things to be fixed (per req.):
- Photo 6: "On-scene militaries on a truck, in Lolol, after the March earthquake." On-scene militaries > Soldiers
- Photo 10: "Destroyed cabanas Mirador by the tsunami in Pichilemu, and also by a kiosk/container." The first part of the sentence doesn't make sense
- Photo 11: "Cars driving to La Cruz Hill in Pichilemu, some hours after the disaster" some > a few?
- Photo 16: "Another destroyed house, some meters behind the Lolol church." some > a few?
- Photo 17: "Pichilemu costanera, the day of the earthquake and tsunami." costanera > highway? Costanera does not have an article on esWP (besides a dab page linking to highways), eswikt, enWP, or enwikt.
- Photo 18: "The most of the balaustrades around the Ross Park, in Pichilemu, were destroyed after the 2010 Pichilemu earthquake." The most > Most, the Ross Park > Ross Park
- Photo 21: "It is broken at the half and is a serious danger to motorists." at the half > in half?
- Photo 22: "In this picture, a house located in front of the beach was later thrown in the half of the roadway." in the half of > into the
- Photo 33: "Fire in a plastic factory, in Ruta 5 Norte." plastic > plastics
- Photo 38: "Zones affected by the February earthquake." The February earthquake affected a much larger area than that. Not sure on a new description, as I don't know what the image describes.
- Photo 40: "USGS shake map of the February earthquake." shake > intensity?
If you have any question, please ask. Griffinofwales (talk) 22:44, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
- all done apart from the last 2. 38 does show the zones affected as bordered by the orange sectors and 40 is actually called a shake map in the image. --MarkTalk to me 22:57, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
- I think the orange lines are borders. You also missed the last part of photo 18. Griffinofwales (talk) 23:16, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
- all done apart from the last 2. 38 does show the zones affected as bordered by the orange sectors and 40 is actually called a shake map in the image. --MarkTalk to me 22:57, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
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Please add Category:Lolol --Diego Grez return fire 17:26, 22 May 2010 (UTC)
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edit{{editprotected}} Wikilink La Cruz Hill > w:La Cruz Hill --Diego Grez return fire 17:50, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
- See discussion at Talk:People from Pichilemu, Chile leave La Cruz Hill#Request. --Pi zero (talk) 13:56, 6 September 2010 (UTC)
- Done --Pi zero (talk) 21:51, 6 September 2010 (UTC)
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edit{{editprotected}} "On the Feb. 27" should be "On February 27". Heavy Water (talk) 16:17, 26 January 2023 (UTC)