Talk:Wales: Final undecided legislators decline to run for Plaid Cymru party leader, leaving Rhun ap Iorwerth unopposed

Review of revision 4731630 [Not ready]

Revision 4731630 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:23, 9 June 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: This article doesn't state the "when" of the focal event; it should be in the lead. The easier way to get a "when" into this lead is by adjusting the focus to Williams and Gwenllian declining to run, leaving Ap Iorwerth the sole candidate for now. Also, please remember to internationalize (not everyone knows where Plaid Cymru is or what the Senedd is), add links (local where possible, Wikipedia where necessary), and add more categories. Comments by reviewer: @Asheiou. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4731630 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:23, 9 June 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: This article doesn't state the "when" of the focal event; it should be in the lead. The easier way to get a "when" into this lead is by adjusting the focus to Williams and Gwenllian declining to run, leaving Ap Iorwerth the sole candidate for now. Also, please remember to internationalize (not everyone knows where Plaid Cymru is or what the Senedd is), add links (local where possible, Wikipedia where necessary), and add more categories. Comments by reviewer: @Asheiou. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Party of Wales

Hiya @Heavy Water, Plaid definitely uses the English translation listed. https://www.partyof.wales/ Asheiou (talk) 00:30, 10 June 2023 (UTC)

The reason I didn't specifically use a source for this claim is because I thought it counted under a "sky is blue" sort of deal. If you'd like to add the source and then the translation back in then feel free. Asheiou (talk) 00:35, 10 June 2023 (UTC)

@Asheiou: WP:SKYISBLUE is somewhat broader than WN:PILLARS' "really obvious things, like 'Paris is in France.'" That reflects a general attempt to comply more strictly with policies — both because Wikinews at least aspires to be a reliable source and Wikipedia doesn't, and Wikinews articles cannot be significantly changed at least 24 hours after publication.

But anyway, yeah, I think that needs a source. I've removed {{under review}} so you can add it in. Heavy Water (talk) 01:03, 10 June 2023 (UTC)

User:Heavy Water, alright, it's added! Asheiou (talk) 01:20, 10 June 2023 (UTC)

Review of revision 4731739 [Passed]

Revision 4731739 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:33, 10 June 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Verifying what's sourced to the Senedd did require me to use a drop-down menu that technically changed the URL, but considering it was literally on the same page, I allowed it. I also did more adjustment of the headline's focus than I normally would've (Ap Iorwerth set to be next leader of Plaid Cymru to Wales: Final undecided legislators decline to run for Plaid Cymru party leader, leaving Rhun ap Iorwerth unopposed), but then it must be considered this is a first article, a good one at that. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4731739 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:33, 10 June 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Verifying what's sourced to the Senedd did require me to use a drop-down menu that technically changed the URL, but considering it was literally on the same page, I allowed it. I also did more adjustment of the headline's focus than I normally would've (Ap Iorwerth set to be next leader of Plaid Cymru to Wales: Final undecided legislators decline to run for Plaid Cymru party leader, leaving Rhun ap Iorwerth unopposed), but then it must be considered this is a first article, a good one at that. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Review of revision 4731740 [Passed]

Revision 4731740 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:35, 10 June 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I just did it again (edit-conflicted with myself, that is). The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4731740 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:35, 10 June 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I just did it again (edit-conflicted with myself, that is). The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.