Talk:US National Park Service announces part of Yosemite National Park to close for days as flooding forecast

Latest comment: 1 year ago by SVTCobra in topic Review of revision 4724013 [Passed]

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Thanks @SVTCobra for taking the time to review this article and to give me feedback. I think I've made the proper corrections and have resubmitted. Dr vulpes (talk) 09:59, 26 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

I have done some copy-editing and added images. Cheers, SVTCobra 13:35, 26 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
The NPS map shows it's really a quite small area of the overall park. SVTCobra 13:38, 26 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
It might be small when compared to the rest of the park but that is where a majority of people go when they visit the park. Also it's where the camp ground and hotels are located. Dr vulpes (talk) 04:12, 27 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

Review of revision 4724013 [Passed]

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Somehow I lost the conversion template when correcting the temperatures. Heavy Water (talk) 17:23, 28 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
@Heavy Water:. The conversion template doesn't work for differentials, only absolute temperatures. I tried to use is but if it is 10 degrees the output is 10 °F (−12.2 °C), yielding negative numbers. Anyway, why did you drop the part about the Merced River and the level which forces closures? Cheers,--SVTCobra 18:02, 28 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
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