Talk:Former U.S. First Lady Rosalynn Carter dies at 96
Review?
edit@Heavy Water Any chance for one? Thanks. Big news across the world. MissedJetliner (talk) 02:16, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- Yeah, this is on my radar. But please, there isn't any need to ping me to do a review with every article (as with the bridge protests), since anyone can see them all in the queue. Heavy Water (talk) 04:14, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- Heavy Water this article is relevant, it is about a recent death, it is journalistic and notable, please can you publish it.Ucriblt89 (talk) 16:47, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- Sorry about the constant pinging. MissedJetliner (talk) 17:06, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Heavy Water Can you publish it? It's an article about a well known person in the U.S., relevant for Wikinews and has received significant coverage in the world including Greece. NikosLikomitros (talk) 17:37, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- I'm reviewing it (as the template on the article says). I can't guarantee right now it will pass review and be published, although that is likely. Heavy Water (talk) 17:51, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Heavy Water Can you publish it? It's an article about a well known person in the U.S., relevant for Wikinews and has received significant coverage in the world including Greece. NikosLikomitros (talk) 17:37, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
Regarding the use of split paragraph quoting
edit@Heavy Water, just to clarify a bit on this diff: this is entirely valid journalese - for example see the comment by Labour leader Keir Starmer in this BBC article or the statement from June Steenkamp in this CNN article. There was a slight formatting mistake in a spurious quotation mark, but this is a pretty standard quote formation. Hope this is a useful explainer! Ash Thawley (talk) (calendar) 19:37, 24 November 2023 (UTC)
- A slight issue with "he continued" here is it implies a direct connection between the two sentences, whereas in actuality there's a sentence between them in his statement. The physical separation can help readers understand there's potentially part of the statement cut for brevity. Ash Thawley (talk) (calendar) 19:39, 24 November 2023 (UTC)
- Certainly a valid construct, but I've been told not to use it if the two quoted portions weren't said exactly in that order, with nothing in between. I don't see this implication with "continued", but I've no strong feelings; I can change it to "said". Heavy Water (talk) 19:49, 24 November 2023 (UTC)
Review of revision 4756410 [Passed]
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What does this mean?
editShe had a May diagnosis of dementia. What does May diagnosis of dementia refer to? Thank you. SkruhKidd (talk) 17:09, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
- Um...what does this mean? Is it the word order that you perceive as unclear? It's synonymous with, "She was diagnosed with dementia in May." Heavy Water (talk) 17:24, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
- Okay thank you. 64.39.81.54 (talk) 17:40, 26 November 2023 (UTC)