Talk:Former Egyptian President Hosni Mubarak dies

Review of revision 4548409 [Not ready]

Revision 4548409 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 07:01, 26 February 2020 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Where, when, why not answered in first paragraph. Please see WN:5W. Minimal required length is three paragraphs. Please check your talk page and request assistance if it is required. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4548409 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 07:01, 26 February 2020 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Where, when, why not answered in first paragraph. Please see WN:5W. Minimal required length is three paragraphs. Please check your talk page and request assistance if it is required. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4548554 [Passed]

Revision 4548554 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:03, 27 February 2020 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The quote that was cut during review appears in the ABC source, however I wonder if the source has been altered: the quote appears as seemingly a pull-quote, but doesn't appear in the article otherwise; the pull-quote says "he said in a statement", but it's not clear who "he" is, as the wording doesn't sound as if it was said by the president, and the same source also says specifically, two paragraphs earlier, that al-Sisi did not mention Mubarak's presidency. It would, indeed (as remarked in an embedded comment in the article), have been good to know what cities were being referred to. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4548554 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:03, 27 February 2020 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The quote that was cut during review appears in the ABC source, however I wonder if the source has been altered: the quote appears as seemingly a pull-quote, but doesn't appear in the article otherwise; the pull-quote says "he said in a statement", but it's not clear who "he" is, as the wording doesn't sound as if it was said by the president, and the same source also says specifically, two paragraphs earlier, that al-Sisi did not mention Mubarak's presidency. It would, indeed (as remarked in an embedded comment in the article), have been good to know what cities were being referred to. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.