Talk:Cyclists Jason English and Liz Smith win 24 Solo in Australia

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Gryllida in topic Review of revision 1865190 [Passed]

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This headline will want changing — needs to be a sentence, and perhaps a dash more specificity. --Pi zero (talk) 21:20, 31 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

A suggestion from a more experienced editor would have been appreciated.   How about now? Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:49, 1 April 2013 (UTC)Reply
At first look, it seems plausible.
Sorry, I'd have tried to make a specific suggestion, or even moved it myself, if I'd had a chance to study it properly. I figured since I didn't have time to do so myself, the least I could do was leave a note to direct others' attention to it. Realizing it's really easy to overlook stuff. --Pi zero (talk) 20:14, 1 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

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