Talk:46 illegal Afghan immigrants suffocate in truck in Pakistan

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Category:Balochistan (Pakistan) and Category:Quetta need to be added. Ali Rana (talk) 06:46, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

Done — Gopher65_talk 01:29, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Title

"46 suffocated Afghanistan victims return home" makes me think these people are now zombies. Could a less...awkward title be considered? --Resplendent (talk) 23:34, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

Agreed, but this is a tricky one. The titles that the sources use also raise questions, but overall I think they are better. --SVTCobra 23:41, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

I see what you mean about the zombies, not so good. Changed title above, if longer titles are ok, then it could still read...

• 46 illegal Afghan immigrants suffocate in truck in Pakistan; bodies returned home
• Bodies of 46 Afghan illegal immigrants returned home.
• Bodies returned home to Afghanistan after Pakistan container truck tragedy
• Bodies of Afghanistan illegal immigrants who tragically suffocated in Pakistan returned home.

SriMesh | talk 04:22, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

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{{editprotected}} Category:Quetta. Ali Rana (talk) 07:15, 1 October 2009 (UTC)

Done –Juliancolton | ^Talk 16:53, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

Article is misleading

According to reports, each person paid 30,000 rupees (about $30) [1] but the article here states $4,000 to $8,000. That's a very huge difference. Afghans don't need to pay a penny to visit Pakistan, 3 months visa is free vice versa.--Afghan King (talk) 20:53, 18 March 2013 (UTC)

This appears to be some sort of implicit proposal for a correction, so I'm tagging it as such. --Pi zero (talk) 22:36, 18 March 2013 (UTC)

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Done — The article was incorrect, but 30000 Rs is more like 400 dollars, not 30. Note that one source does indeed claim that 4 to 8 thousand was paid per person. That is incorrect. They probably meant that 4000 to 8000 was paid total. — Gopher65_talk 02:20, 2 November 2013 (UTC)