Talk:US state of Wisconsin holds 2020 election amidst COVID-19 concerns

Latest comment: 3 years ago by 2600:387:5:807:0:0:0:26 in topic Super Tuesday

Notes edit

--DannyS712 (talk) 04:17, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Headline edit

This article needs a better headline.
•–• 09:35, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Any suggestions? --DannyS712 (talk) 13:21, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
To begin with, think of the global audience. What will they think of it? For example: "What the heck is Wisconsin?"
•–• 13:23, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
I understand that this needs a better headline. My question was if you have any suggestions for a better headline. --DannyS712 (talk) 13:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
"US state of Wisconsin [...]"? Not as compact as "Wisconsin, US [...]" but more explanatory, and they're short words as long as one says "US" rather than "United States". --Pi zero (talk) 14:35, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  Done Thanks for the constructive suggestions Pi zero --DannyS712 (talk) 18:45, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

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@Pi zero: I didn't do that; I wrote the article separate from the sources, and then tweaked to avoid similarity when I later compared. Why do you suggest I did that? --DannyS712 (talk) 23:13, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
@DannyS712: I didn't say you copied. No doubt my phrasing wasn't ideal (writing review comments is, well, difficult). However you got to the position where you were making those "distance from source language" edits, when coping with such a situation, aim for more fundamental structural change. --Pi zero (talk) 23:34, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Pi zero: if you saw, I tried to make a more fundamental change in places, and it was then too close to a different source... --DannyS712 (talk) 23:39, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
That sort of thing can be a problem, yeah. --Pi zero (talk) 23:42, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Super Tuesday edit

Was that postponed? 2600:387:5:807:0:0:0:26 (talk) 23:10, 13 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

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