Talk:US scientists create prototype of autonomous origami-inspired robot
Past tense
editParagraphs 3 and 4 ("Once the battery is attached to the design, ...") should be in past tense. --Gryllida 06:56, 8 August 2014 (UTC)
Miura-ori and its unusual properties
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- The folding pattern studied by Cornell-led research team is well-known in origami Miura-ori. Its unusual properties were noticed first by Chris Santangelo of the University of Massachusetts, Amherst.
Well known for what? What unusual properties? This paragraph may need to be more specific. --Gryllida 06:58, 8 August 2014 (UTC)
It may be a nice idea to mention a couple adjectives to describe the primary features of Miura-ori, i.e. how it's different ("this origami is done by folding along parallelogram lines"). An average reader would not know this. --Gryllida 07:01, 8 August 2014 (UTC)
(Note that I did not remove the paragraph; I moved it one paragraph top.) Gryllida 07:01, 8 August 2014 (UTC)
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- Btw, non-free images are not ideal. It's usually better to use images that can be used as freely as possible, so as not to create complications for syndication of our articles. --Pi zero (talk) 15:28, 11 August 2014 (UTC)