Talk:U.S. judge orders release of President Trump's tax records, appeals court issues delay

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Anyone please feel free to jump in and add to this. I'm not sure I'll be able to finish writing in time otherwise. —mikemoral (talk · contribs) 06:49, 8 October 2019 (UTC)

I figure the appeals court granted a stay of execution for this article as well as for the enforcement of the District Court's ruling. I've already buried Pi zero with articles for review. But if someone else wants to finish it, I can review. --SVTCobra 03:16, 9 October 2019 (UTC)
@SVTCobra:   Done, please review --DannyS712 (talk) 17:21, 9 October 2019 (UTC)
OK, very well. I will begin shortly. Thanks. --SVTCobra 18:22, 9 October 2019 (UTC)
@DannyS712: There were some essential elements missing from the article. I think it can be fixed relatively easily, but I had to fail the review. Cheers, --SVTCobra 19:50, 9 October 2019 (UTC)
@Mikemoral: I'm not going to be able to address the review - care to take another pass at the article? --DannyS712 (talk) 23:24, 9 October 2019 (UTC)
@DannyS712:   Doing...mikemoral (talk · contribs) 23:57, 9 October 2019 (UTC)
@Mikemoral: Can you put a little of that in the lede? --SVTCobra 00:15, 10 October 2019 (UTC)
@Mikemoral: Maybe I was unclear or the review was unclear. The lede still fails to explain why this is even a court case. It does not need names in the lede, just the gist of what's happening. --SVTCobra 00:35, 10 October 2019 (UTC)
OK ... I guess I spoke too soon. --SVTCobra 00:39, 10 October 2019 (UTC)

@DannyS712, SVTCobra: I think I have addressed the concerns, and provided some background to explain things more. —mikemoral (talk · contribs) 00:42, 10 October 2019 (UTC)

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