Talk:Transgender woman hired as city manager for Lake Worth, Florida

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The third paragraph is very confusing. --SVTCobra 01:44, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

I c/e'd it a bit. DragonFire1024 (Talk to the Dragon) 01:52, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

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Horrible title

"Transsexual hired as..." moved to "Transgendered woman hired as..." Cary Bass (talk) 16:16, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

And, upon consultation, moved to "Transgender woman" for correct grammar. Cary Bass (talk) 16:20, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

"Allegedly fired"

She was not allegedly fired. She was fired. The reasons she was fired are alleged. Please fix this! Cary Bass (talk) 16:26, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

Better now? --Brian McNeil / ^talk 16:34, 9 April 2009 (UTC)