Talk:Thousands march in gay pride parade in Buenos Aires

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Check the grammar, please. Thank you. Loco085 23:56, 19 November 2007 (UTC)

I'd correct the grammar but I'm not completely sure what you mean at one or two points. By "In exclusive declarations to Wikinews" do you mean an exclusive interview? I'm also not completely sure what word is meant when you say a "A police operative"- do you mean a group or a battalion or what? Finally, I'm not sure what the phrase "project of law" means, but it looks to me like simply saying "law" would do the same in that context. JoshuaZ 00:29, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
Yes, I interviewed Lubertino and in spanish it's common to say: "In exlusive declarations to "name of the media", but I am not sure if in english can be use that. "A police operative" refers to a "police operation", is that better?. And "project of law" refers to a project that is sent to the Congress, which can turn into law or not. Loco085 00:49, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
I made further edits, please check to make sure I didn't mess anything up. BTW I changed the "In exlusive declarations" to "In statements made exclusively to Wikinews". Cheers, --SVTCobra 00:53, 20 November 2007 (UTC)

Also, the image caption "The parade culminated in National Congress" I presume should be "The parade culminated in front of the National Congress" or "The parade culminated at the National Congress." JoshuaZ 01:03, 20 November 2007 (UTC)

I think you can safely change it to either of the two. Other than that, I think it is good to go. --SVTCobra 01:08, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
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