Talk:Snorkeller drowns at popular Gold Coast swimming spot

Review of revision 4833362 [Not ready]

Revision 4833362 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:35, 5 January 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: Brisbane Times has a subscription-based model q.v. WN:PAYWALL. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4833362 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:35, 5 January 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: Brisbane Times has a subscription-based model q.v. WN:PAYWALL. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4834282 [Not ready]

Revision 4834282 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 05:23, 7 January 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Just running an initial automated check for verbatim phrases of three words or more using Earwig's Copyvio Detector, extensive similarities are present: Identical phrases with Nine News: "pulled from the ocean at a popular swimming spot" "Emergency services were called to Wave Break Island" "the woman was pulled from the water" "Police will prepare a report for the coroner. Her death comes just days after another man drowned at Currumbin Beach" "33 people lost their lives to drowning" "the most dangerous time to be in the water" The Sydney Morning Herald: "Police will prepare a report for the coroner." Please keep in mind the rule of thumb there should be no verbatim phrases like these that are of three or more words. Beware of structural similarities (similarities in the sequencing of information, the structure of sentences, etc.), too; en.wn articles must present information in an entirely different way from any of their sources. The 33 drownings in December statistic really begs the question of where when one reads it. The article its source links to, also from Nine News, implies it's across Australia and also as of December 30. "Life savers have warned" is quite unspecific as to who it is being attributed to. The Sydney Morning Herald provides more detail. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4834282 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 05:23, 7 January 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Just running an initial automated check for verbatim phrases of three words or more using Earwig's Copyvio Detector, extensive similarities are present: Identical phrases with Nine News: "pulled from the ocean at a popular swimming spot" "Emergency services were called to Wave Break Island" "the woman was pulled from the water" "Police will prepare a report for the coroner. Her death comes just days after another man drowned at Currumbin Beach" "33 people lost their lives to drowning" "the most dangerous time to be in the water" The Sydney Morning Herald: "Police will prepare a report for the coroner." Please keep in mind the rule of thumb there should be no verbatim phrases like these that are of three or more words. Beware of structural similarities (similarities in the sequencing of information, the structure of sentences, etc.), too; en.wn articles must present information in an entirely different way from any of their sources. The 33 drownings in December statistic really begs the question of where when one reads it. The article its source links to, also from Nine News, implies it's across Australia and also as of December 30. "Life savers have warned" is quite unspecific as to who it is being attributed to. The Sydney Morning Herald provides more detail. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.