Talk:Second data recorder is found for China Eastern flight 5735

Note to reviewer

The BBC source says the flight data recorder was found on Saturday, however the other two sources say Sunday, with one even providing the exact time of day, so I discounted the BBC on this fact. I suspect it may be an error due to time differences, but of course, I can't be sure. --SVTCobra 01:34, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

Review of revision 4670901 [Passed]

Revision 4670901 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:30, 29 March 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Some of these really verge on paraphrasing: "scattered debris widely" vs original "widely strewn debris". But good for recognising appropriate synonyms and so forth. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4670901 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:30, 29 March 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Some of these really verge on paraphrasing: "scattered debris widely" vs original "widely strewn debris". But good for recognising appropriate synonyms and so forth. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Review of revision 4670903 [Passed]

Revision 4670903 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:31, 29 March 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: In some areas near to paraphrasing: "widely strewn debris" (original) vs "scattered debris widely" (NPR). Nonetheless good for recognising synonyms and so forth. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4670903 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:31, 29 March 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: In some areas near to paraphrasing: "widely strewn debris" (original) vs "scattered debris widely" (NPR). Nonetheless good for recognising synonyms and so forth. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

@JJLiu112: Indeed! Sometimes it is hard to find other words when one has read some good ones. I just couldn't come up with a better word than "debris". Secondly, I do like how you re-ordered the latter paragraphs in the article. I do agree it reads better after that. Cheers, --SVTCobra 05:49, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

P.S. Why are there two passing reviews? Just curious. Cheers, --SVTCobra 05:51, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

Woops! Glitch, I guess. JJLiu112 (talk) 06:02, 29 March 2022 (UTC)