Talk:Sea lion walks from beach into Pantai Inn in California

Original reporting

I got the interview replies by email, will forward before submitting for review. Gryllida 01:57, 30 March 2013 (UTC)

• Done. Gryllida 22:22, 2 April 2013 (UTC)

Headline

The word "the" should be removed from the headline (cf. headlinese). --Pi zero (talk) 02:59, 30 March 2013 (UTC)

Brilliant; done. Gryllida 03:33, 30 March 2013 (UTC)

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major point missing

Distance beach - Inn? --Itu (talk) 18:28, 5 April 2013 (UTC)

Indeed, that should have been included. --Pi zero (talk) 18:36, 5 April 2013 (UTC)

On further consideration, it's worth noting there is a picture that shows about how close it is to the sea. --Pi zero (talk) 18:39, 5 April 2013 (UTC)

But not necessary the Inn. --Itu (talk) 20:31, 5 April 2013 (UTC)