Talk:Pope Benedict XVI heads to the UK amid protests

Hi, it's the first time I write an article in English on Wikinews (I usually write on Italian Wikinews, actually this article is translated from the Italian article that I wrote on it.wikinews), and so I don't know if my English level is sufficient to write an article as this one I wrote here today. I hope it's correct enough, but, otherwise, say it to me without any problem. Thanks, --Mattia Luigi Nappi (talk) 15:10, 15 September 2010 (UTC)

Review of revision 1094719 [Failed]

Revision 1094719 of this article has been reviewed by BarkingFish (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:49, 15 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Needs copyedit to do some work on the English, contributor has made a very good try, doesn't need much work. Comments by reviewer: All in all a very good article, needs a little work, see my comments, but a great shot. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1094719 of this article has been reviewed by BarkingFish (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:49, 15 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Needs copyedit to do some work on the English, contributor has made a very good try, doesn't need much work. Comments by reviewer: All in all a very good article, needs a little work, see my comments, but a great shot. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

As the reviewer, I feel it only right to declare that I have a vested interest in this article, and in the visit as a whole, both as a Catholic and as one of 12 Co-ordinators for people attending this event in my parish and region. As such, I feel it unsafe per my own standards of NPOV to perform further reviews on this article. Apologies to those concerned. BarkingFish (talk) 21:43, 15 September 2010 (UTC)

Review of revision 1094763 [Passed]

Revision 1094763 of this article has been reviewed by Diego Grez (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:44, 15 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: k The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1094763 of this article has been reviewed by Diego Grez (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:44, 15 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: k The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.