Talk:Michael Schumacher wakes up from coma

Quick comment

One reads through the lede and still doesn't know why the story is significant because one still doesn't know who Michael Schumacher is. This calls for perhaps two or three words, perhaps borrowed from the second paragraph. --Pi zero (talk) 04:16, 19 June 2014 (UTC)

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Revision 2699579 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 08:03, 20 June 2014 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: At this point, this article just barely scrapes into newsworthiness due to timing I've left The Australian as a source as it provides the very basics. The rest is behind a paywall I cut a few things as I couldn't seem to verify them in the sources provided. I suggest to the contributors checking the Discussion pages of any article you contribute as they may provide helpful hints as to getting the article published. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.