Talk:Médecins Sans Frontières closes hospital amid rising violence in Haiti
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Revision 4715712 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 07:25, 12 March 2023 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Please, please work on your paraphrasing. I don't think there's a single sentence I could keep unaltered just because it was nearly the same sentence, or exactly the same but with the words jumbled about a bit. Bit of a missed opportunity not to elaborate on the situation, especially given the plethora of unused quotes in Al Jazeera. Otherwise OK. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4715712 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 07:25, 12 March 2023 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Please, please work on your paraphrasing. I don't think there's a single sentence I could keep unaltered just because it was nearly the same sentence, or exactly the same but with the words jumbled about a bit. Bit of a missed opportunity not to elaborate on the situation, especially given the plethora of unused quotes in Al Jazeera. Otherwise OK. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Timing
edit@CSJJ104:. I hesitate to say you 'got lucky' with an unusually quick review, but going forward it is best to select topics with focal events that are closer to the present than this was. Submitting an article on a Saturday with a Wednesday focal event means you are already 4 days deep. Many articles here go stale before they even get their first review and they were submitted on the day it happened. I will never discourage you from writing articles you are passionate about but you will have more success if it is timely. Cheers, SVTCobra 09:00, 12 March 2023 (UTC)