Talk:Indiana teen softball player recovering after lighting strike

Review of revision 1438899 [Passed]

Revision 1438899 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:51, 17 March 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: For distance from source (to avoid copyvio), avoiding verbatim copying is necessary but is not enough. A rule of thumb is to have at most three consecutive words from a source, with common sense exceptions like titles; but just "scuffing up" text with synonyms here and there can still be copyvio. Rearrange sentence structure. Preferably, of course, write text with entirely original structure; your goal is to add value with your own way of telling the story. Direct quotes from witnesses are good, adding a human element to the story that makes it more engaging. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1438899 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:51, 17 March 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: For distance from source (to avoid copyvio), avoiding verbatim copying is necessary but is not enough. A rule of thumb is to have at most three consecutive words from a source, with common sense exceptions like titles; but just "scuffing up" text with synonyms here and there can still be copyvio. Rearrange sentence structure. Preferably, of course, write text with entirely original structure; your goal is to add value with your own way of telling the story. Direct quotes from witnesses are good, adding a human element to the story that makes it more engaging. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.