Talk:Indian cricketer Sehwag announces international retirement

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Blood Red Sandman in topic Move request

Review of revision 3912955 [Not ready]

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I've added some more details, and added back in a few words of quotation in reactions from fellow players. While I agree that there was too much quoted at the time of the first review, some indication of what his colleagues said is appropriate I think. I've also attempted to improve the article with some copyediting etc and hope that someone can review this soon - I now can't as I'm too involved! Bencherlite (talk) 10:57, 21 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Great job, Bencherlite (t · c · b), thank you very much for your help ! I agree with you both that there was too much quoted, before, and that some quotes are helpful and your improvements are helpful and quite beneficial. It looks like a 2nd Review is currently taking place by Pi zero (t · c · b). Good luck, -- Cirt (talk) 12:20, 21 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Move request

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@Cirt: Please Move the page to Indian cricketer Sehwag announces retirement
14.139.242.195 (talk) 08:43, 21 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

  Done, great new title ! -- Cirt (talk) 10:15, 21 October 2015 (UTC)Reply
Actually, he's not retiring from all forms of the game so this title is misleading. Pinging Pi zero (t · c · b) in the hope that he sees this before publishing. Bencherlite (talk) 13:31, 21 October 2015 (UTC)Reply
Would inserting 'international' save it? Seems that's the "most important and unique thing." Indian cricketer Sehwag announces internetional retirement? BRS (Talk) (Contribs) 13:35, 21 October 2015 (UTC)Reply
I think you mean "Indian cricketer Sehwag announces international retirement" (methinks you type "internet" too often!), which would work. Bencherlite (talk) 13:42, 21 October 2015 (UTC)Reply
My thanks to you both. :) -- Cirt (talk) 15:38, 21 October 2015 (UTC)Reply
Lol. BRS (Talk) (Contribs) 01:30, 22 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

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