Talk:Guerreiro signs and Ducksch leaves Borussia Dortmund

Mor

@Pi zero: Emre Mor info is available in ESPN FC source; I chose it because it mentions about it.
acagastya 16:07, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Argh; had meant to go back and check the earlier sources for that, and then somehow it slipped my mind. Thanks. --Pi zero (talk) 16:23, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

@Pi zero:I wanted to add Emre Mor's news just in case we need the information in future. Who knows?
acagastya 17:36, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Ahh. --Pi zero (talk) 17:59, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

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Revision 4224860 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:24, 17 June 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4224860 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:24, 17 June 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Alas, I had meant to rename the article before publication, replacing the "and" with a comma, but forgot; it's definitely nowhere near the priority to justify a shortly-after-publish rename. Keeping track of stuff like that is one of the sorts of things I want semi-automated review assistance for. --Pi zero (talk) 16:32, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Editprotected

{{editprotected}} last line of the second paragraph. Sporting director Michael Zorc... It is not clear whose sporting director. So please add "Dortmund's " before sporting director.
acagastya 02:25, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

Not done This article has long been archived. Borussia Dortmund (BVB) is the focal point of the article, so while it could be clearer, the natural assumption would be that it is BVB's sporting director. Also, the quote box makes it clear. --SVTCobra 14:02, 15 January 2018 (UTC)