Talk:Foxconn employee commits suicide over missing iPhone in China
Title edit
"for missing iPhone"? That just doesn't read right. Shouldn't it be "over missing iPhone"? --Brian McNeil / talk 13:13, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
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Revision 851773 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:30, 22 July 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I decided as I only corrected the English and added some shiny presentation/navigation I could still review. 'Verifiable' is touch and go as I don't speak Chinese but it looks ok so far as I can tell. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 851773 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:30, 22 July 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I decided as I only corrected the English and added some shiny presentation/navigation I could still review. 'Verifiable' is touch and go as I don't speak Chinese but it looks ok so far as I can tell. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
- I am a bit bothered by the {{single source}} aspect of this if the Chinese language source can't be verified at all. --SVTCobra 00:53, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
- There are two options here: We can trust a machine translation of the Chinese or I can stick a third source on. Which would you prefer? Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 00:54, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
- List a link of the Google translate of the NetEase source, I guess. Cheers. Gotta go. --SVTCobra 01:04, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
Done. Nite. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 01:08, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
