Talk:Exhibition featuring ethnic music from around the world opens in Crimea
Review of revision 4781057 [Not ready]
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Revision 4781057 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:07, 24 May 2024 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Although (personally) I like your pictorials, we have to turn off the switch on these. 1: You are the reporter for Russian Wikinews -- you wrote and submitted a story about a presentation you gave about a trip you took. At best, there is major navel gazing afoot here. 2:The English is considerably too broken on this one. 3:Again, you are transcluding an article about a presentation you made, about a trip you went on, where you made recordings/took photos. --this is a whirlwhind of navel gazing, poor newsworthiness for an international audience and a pinch of COI. I hope I'm being clear here. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 4781057 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:07, 24 May 2024 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Although (personally) I like your pictorials, we have to turn off the switch on these. 1: You are the reporter for Russian Wikinews -- you wrote and submitted a story about a presentation you gave about a trip you took. At best, there is major navel gazing afoot here. 2:The English is considerably too broken on this one. 3:Again, you are transcluding an article about a presentation you made, about a trip you went on, where you made recordings/took photos. --this is a whirlwhind of navel gazing, poor newsworthiness for an international audience and a pinch of COI. I hope I'm being clear here. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Notes
editThe text has been corrected and some of the photos have been removed. About the video, I'm not sure I understood correctly. Should it have been removed? — Виктор Пинчук (talk) 14:12, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
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Added 8 links to sources as required in the template. Regarding the text correction, please explain in addition which paragraph should be changed. — Виктор Пинчук (talk) 15:36, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
- The {{stale}} template never should have been there. The actual issues are those that were mentioned in the review comments up above — you may find WN:COI and WN:Newsworthiness useful. Heavy Water (talk) 23:49, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
- Your efforts move this a smidge AWAY FROM too much navel gazing......the long term exhibit is the focus -- good effort. I still just don't know about COI here, though. Let me ponder.--Bddpaux (talk) 13:40, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
Review of revision 4782152 [Passed]
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Revision 4782152 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:47, 29 May 2024 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: You have done a decent job on re-focusing on the 'exhibition' as the news event. Still a hair on the Navel-gazing side of things, but I like your photos! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4782152 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:47, 29 May 2024 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: You have done a decent job on re-focusing on the 'exhibition' as the news event. Still a hair on the Navel-gazing side of things, but I like your photos! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |