Talk:British Actress Dame Maggie Smith dies age 89
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Revision 4799616 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 18:42, 27 September 2024 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Could not verify because external sources are not linked. There was a sources section in new article template. Please do not remove it. At least two linked external sources are required. Please add WN:5W -- where, who, what, why, when, how -- to first paragraph. Including such important information as cause and date and place of the death. Overall great work! Please make the changes requested, and re submit. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
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Comments by reviewer: over 7 days old sorry Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |