Talk:Australia's New South Wales Fire Brigades in crisis over bullying
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Review of revision 1042912 [Passed]
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Revision 1042912 of this article has been reviewed by Blurpeace (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:51, 13 June 2010 (UTC).
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edit{{editprotected}} Please change "with 26% of female firefights" in the third-to-last paragraph to "with 26% of female firefighters". Heavy Water (talk) 00:46, 28 August 2023 (UTC)
