Talk:Archbishop of Canterbury crowns King Charles III in the UK
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Revision 4726132 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:04, 9 May 2023 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: There were a lot of unnecessary words, and then there were these sentences: "After the crown was placed on Charles' head, people exclaimed "God save the King!" Not only from people inside the Abbey but also people gathered outside as gun salutes rang out across the kingdom." It sounds like something out of a Victorian novel. Otherwise a very well-written article. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4726132 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:04, 9 May 2023 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: There were a lot of unnecessary words, and then there were these sentences: "After the crown was placed on Charles' head, people exclaimed "God save the King!" Not only from people inside the Abbey but also people gathered outside as gun salutes rang out across the kingdom." It sounds like something out of a Victorian novel. Otherwise a very well-written article. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
- Thanks for the review. In many ways, the whole thing was "like something out of a Victorian novel". And I apologize for using the word "ceremony" too many times. I guess I couldn't come up with good synonyms. --SVTCobra 19:28, 9 May 2023 (UTC)
- I ended up just replacing it with "coronation" where needed. Heavy Water (talk) 20:32, 9 May 2023 (UTC)