Talk:12 dead following police raid of Mexican night club
I'm afraid "confirmed the destitution" ether doesn't mean what you think it means or is POV. At present the phrase very poetically implies that the police men themselves will be punished for acting irresponsibly, but this requires some consideration to deduce. So questions include : Is Cuevas merely condemning the irresponsibly of the raid? If so he is claiming or asserting, not confirming. Or has he said that charges will be pressed against the officers? If so he is confirming, but not destitution. Well, destitution should be changed regardless. Nyarlathotep (talk) 00:10, 22 June 2008 (UTC)
Location intro
editThe intro to this implies written by someone in Mexico, if not the case it should be changed. --Brian McNeil / talk 00:20, 22 June 2008 (UTC)
Cleanup needed
editI didn't unpublish because it has already been mirrored. I have no time now. --SVTCobra 05:37, 22 June 2008 (UTC)