Wikinews talk:Briefs/April 18, 2014
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Pi zero in topic Review of revision 2556252 [Passed]
Pre-review comments
edit- There may be a problem with the FIFA item. It didn't say what it was talking about, so I added some words at the front about FIFA, but you may want to mention what sport it is since some listenders/readers might not know what sport FIFA implies.
- The words "which is", added to the Westboro Baptist Church item, are just a suggestion; the sentence is kind of long and hard to parse, and it seemed the extra words might be useful. But how you read the lines will make all the difference in how understandable it is.
- Several recent stories were omitted, including the two most recent — 1, 2, 3, 4. Why, I wonder?
Review of revision 2556252 [Passed]
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Revision 2556252 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:49, 18 April 2014 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 2556252 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:49, 18 April 2014 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |