User talk:Wassilaabbouduow/Pro-Morsi follower shot dead during riot in Cairo

Review of revision 1970606 [Not ready]

Revision 1970606 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:54, 14 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: Please read the style guide; many simple mistakes can be avoided thereby, which would make review (which is already a big task asked of volunteer reviewers) more onerous. Things I can immediately see: The lede doesn't answer basic question "when". No external links are allowed in the body of an article. Key places and people (and occasionally other words, but mostly places and people) should be wikilinked using {{w}}, like this: {{w|Cairo}} produces: Cairo. There should be an infobox, preferably a picture of some sort, and the article should be categorized. See similar articles for examples. Date format, as specified in the style guide, is "Month day, year". For example, "August 13, 2013" There's some kind of problem in the sources section, an extra }}. Surely that can be cleaned up? Authors in the Sources section should be Mixed Case, rather than ALL CAPS. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1970606 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:54, 14 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: Please read the style guide; many simple mistakes can be avoided thereby, which would make review (which is already a big task asked of volunteer reviewers) more onerous. Things I can immediately see: The lede doesn't answer basic question "when". No external links are allowed in the body of an article. Key places and people (and occasionally other words, but mostly places and people) should be wikilinked using {{w}}, like this: {{w|Cairo}} produces: Cairo. There should be an infobox, preferably a picture of some sort, and the article should be categorized. See similar articles for examples. Date format, as specified in the style guide, is "Month day, year". For example, "August 13, 2013" There's some kind of problem in the sources section, an extra }}. Surely that can be cleaned up? Authors in the Sources section should be Mixed Case, rather than ALL CAPS. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1970715 [Not ready]

Revision 1970715 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:08, 14 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: This seems out of date given the events since, doesn't it? Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1970715 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:08, 14 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: This seems out of date given the events since, doesn't it? Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.