User talk:Melissa Carlton/Hodgetts makes it a Tassie trio for London 2012 Paralympic Games
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Doesn't look irrideemable, but as part of the "Wikimedians to the Games" contributions needs to be closer to what will be published; copyedit on stuff like this takes at least as long as fact-checking, we need people who can do the majority of the sub-editing work themselves. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1524367 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 09:35, 9 June 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer:
Doesn't look irrideemable, but as part of the "Wikimedians to the Games" contributions needs to be closer to what will be published; copyedit on stuff like this takes at least as long as fact-checking, we need people who can do the majority of the sub-editing work themselves. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
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and then there were four edit
w:Mark Jamieson has been announced as part of the cycling team. Is he Taswegian enough? He is/was a resident; born in VIC. Is three the highest number of tassies ever included in the team? If he is claimed by Tasmanian, this story could be revised a bit to mention Mark Jamieson, which would make it a 'fresh' story. John Vandenberg (talk) 12:44, 13 June 2012 (UTC)
- Good point. INcidentally, do they really get called "Taswegians"? --Brian McNeil / talk 12:48, 13 June 2012 (UTC)