Comments from feedback form - "Just some errors- firstly, I d..."
Just some errors- firstly, I do not believe that WBC is "protecting outside the venue." I think they're protesting, so that could use attention. Secondly, the author says that Gaga tells her "fan" things- in this usage it should be fans as there are probably more than one. Nicely put together otherwise.
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