Comments from feedback form - "The article is straight to the..."

Comments from feedback form - "The article is straight to the..."

The article is straight to the point and backs up the details with statements from reliable sources. It does, however, contain several grammatical errors (placement of punctuation). It is short and dry. The entire article was formed by stringing one quote after another.

67.140.31.33 (talk)03:51, 16 October 2012