Talk:Younger brother of North Korean founding leader dies aged 101
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editAll references to Kim Yong Ju's political career, his studies in the USSR, his role in the succession and his distate for the cult of personnality are taken from his wikipedia page. Henrymyman (talk) 13:39, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Please disregard this comment, as it is not applicable anymore. Henrymyman (talk) 16:47, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
Well.....hmmmmmm.........
editHistorically, Wikipedia is a dicey source, although one can add a 'Wikipedia article' box at the bottom of the article to point readers in that direction. To that end, stuff in the 3rd paragraph is problematic, because I really couldn't verify that stuff in the supplied sources. I think this article can be salvaged, though.....and is certainly newsworthy!--Bddpaux (talk) 15:55, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- @Bddpaux: I removed the information that can't be verified and sourced what I can from the AP article. The statement regarding him being passed over is addressed in the AP article. Henrymyman (talk) 16:46, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
Review of revision 4653340 [Not ready]
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Revision 4653340 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:55, 15 December 2021 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: A few problematic issues but still has potential! Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 4653340 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:55, 15 December 2021 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: A few problematic issues but still has potential! Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 4653372 [Passed]
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Revision 4653372 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:08, 16 December 2021 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4653372 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:08, 16 December 2021 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
I forgot to protect the page. Sorry. --SVTCobra 22:38, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
- @SVTCobra: Don't worry about it, no damage seems to have been done. Henrymyman (talk) 22:47, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
Small bug.
editI'm not an authorized account so I cant directly edit the page but the link to the Order of Kim Il-Sung is broken. I believe it's because its written as {{w|Order of Kim Il Sung}} instead of {{w|Order of Kim Il-Sung}} The page doesn't redirect correctly on Wikipedia either, and I would've fixed it there but {{w|Order of Kim Il Sung}} is a Fully Protected page, so I cant edit it to simply redirect it to the correct page.
AGuyNamedSquid (talk) 20:48, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
- @AGuyNamedSquid: I've fixed it, thank you for pointing it out!. @Cromium: If you have a few seconds could you approve my edit? Henrymyman (talk) 21:21, 18 January 2022 (UTC)