Talk:Wikinews previews the 2008 Australian rules football International Cup
This article has been reviewed by Anonymous101 (talk · contribs) and has failed its review at 09:53, 17 August 2008 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: See my below comments --Anonymous101talk 09:53, 17 August 2008 (UTC) The article should be switched from {{Review}} to {{Develop}}, if it has not already been done, and these issues should be addressed. It is recommended that the appropriate templates be added to the article itself, if applicable. This notice should be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Is there any current event in the article, or is it just saying what will happen in three weeks? (Also, OR notes are needed) Anonymous101talk 08:08, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
- Both. Lead up matches (NZ v Maffra, Danish grand final, PNG match in coolongatta etc) will be included --RockerballAustralia (talk) 22:53, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
Original Research
editMy research is primarily from the New Zealand AFL, the AFL, and World Footy News websites. Some email interviews are planned. This article dosn't have to be published for a week or two. --RockerballAustralia (talk) 09:14, 4 August 2008 (UTC)
Preview?
editThis article doesn't do much previewing. 74.125.74.35 23:00, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
Unsourced information
editThis article contains a lot of unsourced information. --SVTCobra 18:18, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
There are also other problems, such as "International Cup champions are considered a distant second to Australia." What does that even mean?
And it is very confusing to read with all the jumping back and forth between country and team names. --SVTCobra 18:27, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
- Fix team names Done, Clarify "distant second to Australia" Done
- Is there a source for the full brackets and all participants? --SVTCobra 00:47, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
- Yes. Soure has been added --RockerballAustralia (talk) 04:40, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
- I still don't understand how "International Cup champions are considered a distant second to Australia." How can a football team be second to a country? Are they second to Australian champions? Or are the second to any Australian team? It is very confusing. --SVTCobra 00:49, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
- I've changed the wording in that sentence to clear that up. Hopefully it is better understood now. --RockerballAustralia (talk) 04:40, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
Not publishable
editI think that this article cannot be published as the newest source is over a month old, so it cannot be focusing on a current event. Anonymous101talk 09:50, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
- Just checked the sources, and the newsest source is from two days ago. I've just put an old one first. --RockerballAustralia (talk) 10:01, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
- oops, sorry. Anonymous101talk 10:10, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
- Mistakes happen. was that the only thing stopping this article being published?--RockerballAustralia (talk) 10:17, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
review 2
edit This article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:15, 18 August 2008 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: While some of the sources are very old, there are newer ones. --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 02:15, 18 August 2008 (UTC) The article may be switched from {{Review}} to {{Publish}}, if it has not already been done. |
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Please add Category:Australian rules football --121.91.191.1 (talk) 04:59, 1 December 2009 (UTC)
- That category is already there. Tempodivalse [talk] 15:24, 1 December 2009 (UTC)
Add Category:Gippsland Football League -58.163.175.132 (talk) 05:40, 6 January 2010 (UTC)