Talk:Wikinews Shorts: May 8, 2007

NATO forces attacked, civilians caught in the cross fire

Title versus lead sentence

The first sentence says that NATO forces came under attact but the title says that NATO attacked. --SVTCobra 20:13, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

DOE awards management of US nuclear lab to UC-led team

• make sure you add your sources (:O) -Nima Baghaei ^{talk · cont · email} 18:24, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
  • did that Chuck 18:44, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

name

shldn't this be named Lawrence Livermore lab management contract awarded? –Doldrums(talk) 18:46, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

A more accurate name is Lawrence Livermore National Security, LLC (LLNS) Awarded Management & Operation Contract for Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory — Chuck 18:48, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

This is news, shouldn't it be "awards" as opposed to "awarded" - and we use downstyle, not CamEl CaSe. --Brian McNeil / ^talk 18:49, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

Also, I am all for descriptive headlines but this one is really long. If you don't mind, I am going to shorten it and put it in present tense. --SVTCobra 21:52, 8 May 2007 (UTC)