Talk:Wikinews Shorts: January 28, 2012

Partial review

Item EU official resigns over anti-piracy treaty as of 20:11 (a few minutes ago) was publishable. --Pi zero (talk) 20:15, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

Item French troops to end Afghan combat role a year early in 2013 as of 21:19 (a few minutes ago) was publishable. --Pi zero (talk) 21:22, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1385920 [Passed]

Revision 1385920 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:17, 28 January 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: There were a number of elements that did not appear to have been drawn from the sources. Only staggeringly obvious things, like Paris is in France, can be included without sourcing. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1385920 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:17, 28 January 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: There were a number of elements that did not appear to have been drawn from the sources. Only staggeringly obvious things, like Paris is in France, can be included without sourcing. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Adjectives

I guess i'll just have to forgo the urge to add a little colour and stop using adjectives and adverbs.--KTo288 (talk) 15:37, 30 January 2012 (UTC)

That seems somewhat extreme. Not all adjectives/adverbs are created equal, nor are all colo(u)rs. After all, neutral does not necessarily mean colo(u)rless. :-)  --Pi zero (talk) 15:58, 30 January 2012 (UTC)