Talk:Wales widens smoking ban, includes at hospitals, schools and playgrounds
Image and other changes
edit@Dylan Smithson: Could you please add Eluned Morgan's image to the article. I think it will be relevant here.
•–• 07:27, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
I will do so in the morning. Dylan Smithson (talk) 07:48, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- All right!
•–• 07:48, 1 March 2021 (UTC)- @Dylan Smithson: could you also add the full quote about "Banning smoking on hospital grounds" (from The Guardian)?
•–• 16:33, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- @Dylan Smithson: could you also add the full quote about "Banning smoking on hospital grounds" (from The Guardian)?
Questions
editI have emailed Ms Morgan some questions. And if I receive a reply in a timely fashion, I will add them to this article, forward the email to scoop, and ask @Gryllida: to sight those changes.
•–• 16:27, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- Also emailed Mr Clark. If I get a response from both, I might as well create a new article.
•–• 16:52, 1 March 2021 (UTC) - I have received responses from the Welsh government and I have forwarded the email to both @Gryllida: and @Tom Morris: via email. Hopefully, someone will review them on time.
•–• 13:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
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Minor title issue.
editWe may want to consider a rename of the title - «...includes at hospitals...» is a rather awkward turn of phrase and would sound better without the «at». Best, Audrey (talk) 20:10, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
- Even better: Wales widens smoking ban to include hospitals, schools and playgrounds. Audrey (talk) 02:30, 3 March 2021 (UTC)