Talk:Van Canto's Stefan Schmidt on a capella metal, Wacken, Nightwish, piracy & more

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Blood Red Sandman in topic Keep the tone neutral

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Most of the information in the intro sourced from www.vancanto.de. Info on what bands are playing Wacken availible at http://www.wacken.com/en/woa2008/main-bands/billing-2008/ and the description of Wacken as "internationaly famous" and "prestigeous" is common knowledge amongst rock and metal fans. Interview will be conducted via email. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 18:29, 9 February 2008 (UTC)Reply

Keep the tone neutral edit

As you get this interview ready for publication, I'd like the tone of the intro to be more neutral. For instance, I don't like the "Van Canto are now going from strength to strength" sentence. Also, "worldwide" is used twice in a single sentence. --SVTCobra 01:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)Reply

I took a stab at it. I was warned previously that there may be an issue and requested NPOV copyediting at the Water Cooler, but got no response. I'm poor at repairing my own messes, so I can only hope it looks presentable. I'm going to head off soon, so please try and fix it yourselves, people, if there's still a problem as I won't be around for a while. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 07:26, 27 February 2008 (UTC)Reply
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