Talk:US Senate confirms Clinton as Secretary of State

Latest comment: 15 years ago by InfantGorilla in topic Explanations



(note: this is not an actual review, i just read through the article once) Hmm, I think this article is pretty good, but could do a better job at explaining why the Clinton foundation needs to make donations public (it makes sense the third read through, but the first two time I read it, i got confused). Also could be better with explaining what UN ambassador nomination has to do with anything. Cheers. Bawolff 04:13, 22 January 2009 (UTC)Reply

I edited to address these. Unfortunately my prose in the 2nd paragraph is very stilted. Anyone is welcome to fix it. --InfantGorilla (talk) 10:41, 22 January 2009 (UTC)Reply
Thanks Wikidsoup --InfantGorilla (talk) 19:58, 22 January 2009 (UTC)Reply



Is it just me or is the UTC time off 12 hours, I would think that it should have been 00:29 UTC

Oops - my fault - thanks! Actually 10 hours off. I just fixed it. --InfantGorilla (talk) 15:00, 22 January 2009 (UTC)Reply

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