Talk:UN publishes report on 2014 Gaza conflict
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Pi zero in topic Review of revision 3463518 [Passed]
Review of revision 3463518 [Passed]
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Revision 3463518 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:04, 29 April 2015 (UTC).
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Revision 3463518 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:04, 29 April 2015 (UTC).
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This article should not have passed npov, it focused on the UN Secretary-General criticism of the Arab side, but largely ignored his criticism of the Israeli side. --PaulBustion88 (talk) 05:15, 3 May 2015 (UTC)
- Does it come across that way to you? I see it clearly stating that both sides were criticized, and neither side came out looking blameless. I think it's quite well done from a news neutrality perspective. Look at the paragraphs one by one, and consider what each of them adds to the overall picture. --Pi zero (talk) 13:10, 3 May 2015 (UTC)