Talk:UN observers in Syria fired upon as report alleges US warplanes readying attack
Review of revision 1976793 [Not ready] edit
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Revision 1976793 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 07:25, 28 August 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The problem seems to be the lede. It mentions August 21 as the date meaning this story is stale. It also doesn't read like a news lede. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1976793 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 07:25, 28 August 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The problem seems to be the lede. It mentions August 21 as the date meaning this story is stale. It also doesn't read like a news lede. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
August 21 edit
Read it again. It is stating the chemical attack occurred on August 21. DragonFire1024 (Talk to the Dragon) 16:35, 28 August 2013 (UTC)
- The difficulty was likely caused by the absence from the lede of the date of the sniper incident. I added that, before the August 21 date (having consulted with the reporter as well as the sources). --Pi zero (talk) 20:45, 28 August 2013 (UTC)
Review of revision 1977120 [Passed] edit
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Revision 1977120 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:47, 28 August 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1977120 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:47, 28 August 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Categories edit
{{edit protected}} Please move this article from Category:Syria to Category:Syrian Civil War. Thank you. Green Giant (talk) 16:59, 1 October 2015 (UTC)
- Added to the latter. --Pi zero (talk) 00:40, 2 October 2015 (UTC)