Talk:UK teens cleared of school massacre plot

Review of revision 883078 [Passed]

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Revision 883078 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:50, 17 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Weasel warning

This sentence in the opening paragraph is a problem: "Police and the Crown Prosecution Service have been criticised for bringing the case to trial." By whom? Such statements must be attributed per WN:WEASEL. --SVTCobra 02:11, 17 September 2009 (UTC)

In the lead? No chance. The lead must be kept trim; the criticisms are set out later in the article. Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 06:27, 17 September 2009 (UTC)