Talk:UK House of Commons vote against Syria intervention

Review of revision 1977914 [Not ready]

Revision 1977914 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:12, 30 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: See below NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I was unable to verify most of what's here about Miliband's comments. I was unable to verify the passage about Jim Murphy. Sky News was the only non-BBC source when this was first submitted, and was relied upon for quite a few bits here and there as well as several major points. Sky News chose to erase the historical record of what they'd first published, though, substituting a different article with limited overlap with the earlier one. I don't see any copies of the earlier article on the internet, excepting apparent copyvios. Because so much is from BBC, I was unwilling to delete most major points that were left unverified, though I removed one point I suspected Sky News may have had doubts about, and trimmed some things where Sky News was likely a bit more complete than BBC. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1977914 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:12, 30 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: See below NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I was unable to verify most of what's here about Miliband's comments. I was unable to verify the passage about Jim Murphy. Sky News was the only non-BBC source when this was first submitted, and was relied upon for quite a few bits here and there as well as several major points. Sky News chose to erase the historical record of what they'd first published, though, substituting a different article with limited overlap with the earlier one. I don't see any copies of the earlier article on the internet, excepting apparent copyvios. Because so much is from BBC, I was unwilling to delete most major points that were left unverified, though I removed one point I suspected Sky News may have had doubts about, and trimmed some things where Sky News was likely a bit more complete than BBC. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Note: I believe I'd successfully verified everything except those two passages. --Pi zero (talk) 17:13, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

Review of revision 1977947 [Passed]

Revision 1977947 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:39, 30 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The article was manifestly written with extensive influence from both independent sources. I'm satisfied with its original presentation on that basis (though disappointed by Sky News's actions in the matter). The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1977947 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:39, 30 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The article was manifestly written with extensive influence from both independent sources. I'm satisfied with its original presentation on that basis (though disappointed by Sky News's actions in the matter). The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

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{{edit protected}} Please move this article from Category:Syria to Category:Syrian Civil War. Thank you. Green Giant (talk) 17:00, 1 October 2015 (UTC)

Added to the latter. --Pi zero (talk) 00:31, 2 October 2015 (UTC)