Talk:Two jockeys killed in fire in North Yorkshire, England

Review of revision 871566 [Failed]

Revision 871566 of this article has been reviewed by Juliancolton (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:35, 6 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Not ready: "The terrible incident" is not neutral. Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 871566 of this article has been reviewed by Juliancolton (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:35, 6 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Not ready: "The terrible incident" is not neutral. Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 871727 [Passed]

Revision 871727 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:49, 6 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I only reviewed NPOV since Julian did the rest in his last review. Further to that, you might also want to remove "was only" (as in, "was only 18/19") but it's so borderline I'm not concerned by it. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 871727 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:49, 6 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I only reviewed NPOV since Julian did the rest in his last review. Further to that, you might also want to remove "was only" (as in, "was only 18/19") but it's so borderline I'm not concerned by it. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.