Talk:Twelve dead in shooting at offices of French satirical magazine Charlie Hebdo
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Revision 3147028 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:17, 7 January 2015 (UTC).
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Revision 3147028 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:17, 7 January 2015 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
- I'd embarrassingly missed a use of the term "terrorist group" to describe ISIL in a factual rather than attributed passage. During review, that'd be an immediate, no-brainer change to "militant group". I hesitated for a moment over whether to self-sight the change, but ultimately did. --Pi zero (talk) 01:45, 8 January 2015 (UTC)
This portion does not seem factual, but particularly biased-"responsible for deliberately inciting hatred against people of the Islamic faith. According to one report, employees were asked for by name and then executed with a single gunshot wound to the head, however it is possible that in the case of the cartoonists, rather than die honourably, they asked to be allowed commit suicide." It seems this could be better written. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 216.93.214.182 (talk • contribs) 01:57, 8 January 2015
- That was vandalism that accidentally got through. I don't recall ever making that big a mistake [before] in all my years on en.wn. At any rate, the error has been corrected. --Pi zero (talk) 02:32, 8 January 2015 (UTC)