Talk:Three killed, three others injured in stabbing attack in Reading, UK

keywords?

@Zizzu412:. Thank you for creating this article, and submitting for review. Could you wiki-link some keywords so that it is easier for reviewers to review it? Cheers.
•–• 19:16, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

@Acagastya: I'm pretty new to Wikinews. Do I link to Wikipedia or ... Zizzu412 (talk) 20:36, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

@Zizzu412: You can use {{w}} template for linking. If there is a local link, it will link locally. Else it will link to Wikipedia. For example, {{w|Page title|text to display}}.
•–• 20:42, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

During a partial-review session just now, I added wikilinks using 0923 UTC; demonstrates how it's done. :-)  --Pi zero (talk) 16:09, 22 June 2020 (UTC)

similarities to source

During the partial-review session, I noticed several passages too-close-to-source (most of them just long enough to notice at all). This is something we pay careful attention to on Wikinews. There's rather more of it than I'd hope for in such a short article; I'm hoping I can cope with it within my purview as reviewer, though likely to cope I'll have to do more than I can afford to do on a regular basis — the hope is, of course, as you get used to Wikinews writing such things mostly won't happen in your newscopy. (We've long had on our wishlist to better document how to do this; it turns out to be quite challenging to explain well. You want to develop a writing technique in which nothing gets copied-and-changed, all the wording is entirely different from the sources. There's a bit of advice at WN:PILLARS#own, and some discussion at WN:Plagiary.) --Pi zero (talk) 16:09, 22 June 2020 (UTC)

Review of revision 4571424 [Passed]

Revision 4571424 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:43, 23 June 2020 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: In support of a reporter new to Wikinews, I've done more to redress problems here than I could do on a regular basis, to demonstrate various techniques. Beyond various mostly-short passages substantially copied from source, concerns notably included attribution, and reporting actions rather than motivations. See the detailed history of edits during review. (Examining the history-during-review is itself a basic technique, always recommended.) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4571424 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:43, 23 June 2020 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: In support of a reporter new to Wikinews, I've done more to redress problems here than I could do on a regular basis, to demonstrate various techniques. Beyond various mostly-short passages substantially copied from source, concerns notably included attribution, and reporting actions rather than motivations. See the detailed history of edits during review. (Examining the history-during-review is itself a basic technique, always recommended.) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.