Talk:Three dead infants found in Canadian home
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Revision 831938 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:18, 11 June 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This is news, but needs to be reported in way that makes sense. --SVTCobra 02:18, 11 June 2009 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 831938 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:18, 11 June 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This is news, but needs to be reported in way that makes sense. --SVTCobra 02:18, 11 June 2009 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
- I was not the original author, but I did my best to rewrite the article into a more coherant form. Please re-review and see if this is any better. --Jayron32.talk.contribs 16:40, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
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Revision 832847 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:53, 11 June 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: That's much better! --SVTCobra 23:53, 11 June 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 832847 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:53, 11 June 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: That's much better! --SVTCobra 23:53, 11 June 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |