Talk:Texas student Ahmed Mohamed inspires social movement

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Cirt in topic Review of revision 3838886 [Passed]

Original reporting notes


Original reporting notes:

Original reporting includes use of Barack Obama tweet message, and use of image of his tweet. In addition to verification of other tweets referenced in sources double-checked a few times. -- Cirt (talk) 01:15, 22 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

this (really ought to have linked in the notes here; fortunately, dead easy to find). --Pi zero (talk) 22:16, 22 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
It's linked in the source notes for the image page at Wikimedia Commons. :) -- Cirt (talk) 23:25, 22 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Review of revision 3837850 [Not ready]

  1. Copy edited, for focus, bringing key issues together by paragraph.
  2. Copy edited, for focus, arranging material about social movement to one paragraph.
  3. Copy edited, for focus, streamlining presentation of material and focus to upcoming events.
  4. Added new source, ABC News, about visit this weekend to Google Science Fair as VIP guest and meeting with Sergey Brin.
  5. Added new source, Toronto Star, itself citing Associated Press and USA Today, for info about meeting Sergey Brin and Google Science Fair -- as well as upcoming trip, tomorrow (Wednesday), to meet international dignitaries at the United Nations.

Thank you for your helpful comments, Pi zero (t · c · b), I think the article is better for them. I'd like to keep the title, now that the article body text focus is better. -- Cirt (talk) 17:18, 22 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Review of revision 3838886 [Passed]

Thanks very much, Pi zero (t · c · b)! And thank you for your most helpful copy edits! Most appreciated, -- Cirt (talk) 23:40, 22 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
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